Coup de grace (Poem of the Week 5/11/03)
These wide, drooping shoulders, droop forever lower;against the strain ofraw, pulsating blood. Dripping from lashed, blood oozing, bareback wounds;running cold rivulets ofpain, spines...
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YES!!! My dear Ian, this is indeed a dark masterpiece! You're getting a "two bloody talons up" for this outstanding work of poetic darkness! Brightest Blessings,SheVamp V--V"Wish there was something...
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Ian ... excellent Shih, chilling write ... pepper
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((((((((((Ian)))))))) This is chilling down to my toes! I love the way you've constructed this perfect ku-shih! Wow!Annette
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A fine flight of imagination on shadowy wings. The counterpoise of the last verse is wicked!Pete Peru
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Very powerful Ian, you create the dark flow in this well....awesome piece... much enjoyed as always. Good to read you. ~Mystic~"Imagine no daylight only the moon as your guide, When ours is to...
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Congrats, dear partner and friend! Annette
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Ian, Congratulations on winning the P.O.W. award. Wanda
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Congratulations - 'bloody' brilliant write and most deserving of the honor bestowed.
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Wow! Wonderful, Ian! Congrats on the POW....well deserved!~Alaura ~Listen to your heart, but listen closely....it often whispers~
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Ian ... let me add my congrat's, also!Well deserved ... pepper
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